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Re: Motorola i920/i930[edit]
I really appreciate the edits you've made to the article at the subject line, but I have a couple of things I need to tell you about. First of all, "Dwindle" doesn't sound too business-like. In the world of business, decline in demand sounds a lot better than "demand dwindling". Dwindling Demand sounds too awkward and too un-businessey.
Regarding about this link, it is not a complete link yet people who use non-Windows and/or non-Internet Explorer operating systems may or may not be able to view the link that you've mentioned. Please make sure that the link can be viewed in alternative browsers and/or operating systems before you even post it. Also, make sure that there's enough information to cover up the specs of each phone because all that link has is all ringtones, and I regret that it might be considered spam to some, putting yourself at risk. Please make sure that you are using business language when describing demand/supply of goods/services/products, and also please make sure that the link that you're posting is a complete one and that it can be used by all operating systems and all internet browsers. Thanks. — Vesther (U * T/R * CTD) 22:03, 17 July 2006 (UTC)
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