Wikipedia:Peer review/Steven Spielberg/archive1

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Steven Spielberg[edit]

I'd like to know how we can make this page a featured article. For one, I would like to have more analysis on Spielberg's themes and possibly have a greater look at his career. Wiki-newbie 18:26, 17 July 2006 (UTC)

  • Please see automated peer review suggestions here. Thanks, AZ t 15:34, 21 July 2006 (UTC)
  • A few comments:
  • Hardly any references, very bad for an article this size on a subject who is likely to provoke controversy.
  • A bit of repetition (for example attending school and university) and overlinking in the first section (not everything needs linking, it makes it look busy)
  • Needs editing to remove POV phases
  • 'Spielberg and Co.' Who are the 'and Co.'?
  • Have a look at WP:TRIVIA for some suggestions on how to deal with the trivia sections at the end. The trademark section in particular needs some ruthless pruning (Onscreen performers staring, usually at something off camera?!?).
Yomangani 17:21, 24 July 2006 (UTC)
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